Monday, February 10, 2014

Dying Wish

Hold me closer
Hold me tighter
Hold me longer
For, tomorrow
we die.

When you tell me you're here for me
Mean it.
When you tell me I'm beautiful
Mean it.
When you tell me you love me
Mean it.
When you kiss me,
kiss harder,
For, tomorrow
we die.

If I could spend my last moments with you
Dying wouldn't be so
scary.
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10 comments:

  1. Patrick StumpFebruary 10, 2014 at 5:32 PM

    Eat, drink and be merry, for tomorrow, we die. 2nd Nephi 23. or something like that.

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    1. Baylee DodgeFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:21 PM

      Is it? I thought it was just a common phrase. Maybe I've just been living in Utah too long.

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  2. suzie zurfluFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:07 PM

    oh my yes. can i #stolen all of this? seriously. i feel exactly like this. (except the "when you kiss me, kiss me harder..." cuz i've never been kissed.) but i'd like to be. so that is why i feel exactly like this.


    dang gina.

    that was absolutely splendid.

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  3. suzie zurfluFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:08 PM

    p.s. i'm so very honored to be under your "my inspirations" list.

    thank you.

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    1. Baylee DodgeFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:15 PM

      I love your blog and everything in it. Thank YOU.

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  4. Dominic ZappalaFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:42 PM

    Mmmmm I liked this.

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  5. Autumn FireFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:54 PM

    I love the last line.

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  6. Feathers On FishFebruary 11, 2014 at 9:37 PM

    You're a great writer!

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  7. Tim TincherFebruary 12, 2014 at 8:00 PM

    fabulous, it makes me want to be in love

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  8. Jennifer ClarkFebruary 14, 2014 at 5:10 PM

    You are so amazing! I love your writing.

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